3/4H Writer of the Week, June 17 2016

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Writer of the Week: Jordan Pike

Once upon a time there was a famous King, two armed knights, one fire breathing dragon and lastly a snappy crocodile. They all lived in a massive old castle. Three weeks past when the crocodile and the dragon were planning to wreck the tower. They were bad all along so they went to work. First the dragon took a massive breath and squirted fire at the statue of the King. The King knew what had happened so he sent his guards with a big trap that would cut the dragon and crocodile’s heads off!! The castle was saved and the King lived happily ever after!

Yash Tyagi
One summer morning Mrs Quodling wanted a child so Mr Quodling fetched some vegetables from a witches home. The witch said “Stop! You can give me a princess to live with me.” So the witch took a little girl who was walking past her house and made her a princes. The witch locked her up but a prince saved the princess and they lived happily ever after.

Charlie Fisher
Once upon a time there lived a beautiful princess who lived in a dark and very scary castle. One day a fire breathing dragon came and lit all of the beautiful trees on fire. It damaged the whole place but a water dragon who is a good guy tried to fight the fire dragon. The water dragon won and blew all the fire out of the tress and they all lived happily ever after.

Harry Fisher
Once there was a beautiful princess called Alice. One day there was a blue dragon who blew out fire around the castle. Luckily, prince came over the mountains and cut the dragon in half!

Harry Griffiths
Once there lived a beautiful princess. She lived in a castle and loved it. One day a fire breathing dragon blew his fire. It ruined the princess’s castle. So the knights attacked the dragon. The dragon got mad! Luckily the knights defeated the dragon.

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Persuasive Writing

1st June 2016

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to offer you the opportunity to sell an exciting new delicious product in your store.

Caramel Coconut Delight is a drool machine made out of milky white chocolate with crusty brown coconut and a smooth, sticky caramel. The shiny packaging will suddenly attract our precious customers. Our delicious Swiss chocolate has layers and it is a circle. It has milky white chocolate, then the delightful crusty brown coconut then you know what comes next? That’s right; the smooth, sticky caramel.

I recommend Caramel Coconut Delight is sold for $1.50 each and our mini ones are 5cm long and they are sold for $0.15. Our large ones are 40 cm long and they are sold for $2.00. Our chocolate is 25% milk, 25% white chocolate, 25% caramel and 25% coconut. Don’t forget it’s 100% flavour!! In a survey of scientists, 92% prefer Caramel Coconut Delight over Mars Bars.

Please contact me on 139206577

Yours sincerely

Charlie Egan
Chocolate Creator

 

1st June 2016

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to offer you the opportunity to sell and exciting new yummy product in your shop.

Chocangel is a caramel and coconut spectacular fun-filled chocolate with lots of flavour. The colourful box contains real gold and lots of fun. It is also a really long chocolate bar so you can share it with your friends or family. Chocangel will also take you to heaven so you will keep on buying it.

I suggest Chocoangel is sold for the bargain price of only $1. This is an extraordinary deal for a 100 gram moment of heaven. It is 2% healthy and 10000% yummy.

Chocangel has to go into the fridge otherwise it will taste vile. If you put it in the fridge it will taste so good that it melts in your mouth. Please contact me on 98706 to buy Chocangels for your shop.

Yours sincerely

Olivia O’Reilly
Choc-Challenger